The grammar and the story so far is passable but the characters in the story are just way too unrealistic For example the hokage gives a kid who hasn't unlocked his chakra a s rank technique because the mc wanted one with reason being and I quote "you want strong Shinobi's right"

was looking for a story without harem, I had to scroll through about 100 to find this one for that alone here's 4 stars. djy

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I don't know why this has a high rating?. but I think this is very cringe, bad grammar even if translated. Broken dialogues and too many dialogues in 1 chapter. lack of narration, so readers can't imagine what the MC is doing.

to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31. to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31. to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31.

I love it. Feels good inside to read this :) I appreciate the character interactions. The progression is handled really nicely. Overall great vibe. Keep up the good work, yo. 🥑

Первые главы ДЕЙСТВИТЕЛЬНО плохие! Я продержался глав 5... я уже дважды начинаю читать вспоминаю сюжет и бросаю. Слишком много бонусов со старта у героя. Встреча с Дирайей и с Хокаге... ребенка! Это так глупо... И все про него знают и все хотят его убить и гениальный он... о боже... и поселить его к Хатаке когда он Узумаки Учиха... бред!! Намного лучше бы было прочитать про обычного шиноби пробудившего память. В крайнем случае в кланового шиноби... но не в какноничного персонажа. И хотелось бы что бы это было до 2 мировой войны... Подскажите, кто сможет, такой фанфик, можно не на этом сайте.

Well nice one the story is great about a genius well not going to give spoilers about it...support the writer for the effort to make us readers happy.

Good Naruto fics are hard to come by, but this one doesn't disappoint! The author has a good grasp of the established universe despite the invented techniques/powers. He doesn't fail to make it entertaining and enjoyable for readers familiar with Masashi Kishimoto's work. All in all, I'd suggest trying this for anyone dropping by. You won't regret it!

MC is stupid. Just a warning before you start reading.