THE STORY IS MAGNIFICENT I mean the way you wrote all the chapters was weird and bizarre but like in a good way It was as if I was watching a movie And my favorite chapter is the 4th I mean the confusion in that chapter and the way you show the mc's powers were fantastic I can't even understand how are you so good at describing I literally pictured the scenes in my head and it was quite frightening to be honest

The characters are vivid and realistic. The story is well developed and interesting. Amazing job here. However, the only problem imo is that your paragraphs might become a bit too long sometimes to the point it becomes a chore to the eyes. Otherwise, a very good read.

Hmm, In all honesty this book is a good one that keeps me wondering for some reason. The story is fast paced(just my type) and the characters are really relatable. Should leave cliffhangers at the end of most chapters though to keep things interesting. This story has kinda made me feel like I should be checking out my dreams😂😅 Nice story author, nice job.

The story is really interesting and the way the author executes it is pretty good. Although the story is somewhat fast paced it makes for that with contents. The way the story and the characters are processed makes it easier to understand and connect with the story. The fact that the characters are things you can find in the normal life makes it easier to relate to things. Currently, there's 0 chapters for week and looks like it's been like that for a while so I gave the updating stability 2 stars. But don't just skip it, the author may be waiting for feedbacks.

The plot is good and it has an interesting concept . But if I can find a fault then I feel like there are no cliffhangers in the end of the chapters (atleast from the first few I read). And in the 1st chap I was really worried thinking it was the Mc ...eventhough I was wondering how it started like this . But only in the 2nd chap they said it was just a dream . But from the 2nd chap the flow of the story was nice ...introducing all the characters subtly and making us aware of the characters and their personalities.

Pretty cool you guys,enjoyed everything. needed this to help me develop.i actually enjoyed the story, loved it infact.the story itself was amazing like I was seeing everyone and everything thing I could really imagine it in my head .

The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.

This book is really great. I love the way the Author managed to describe every scene. It's just soooo vivid and real. And as an Author myself, I can only imagine all the time and the effort you need to write each and every chapter. Kudos to you! [img=recommend][img=fp]

This is actually pretty good...I like the way the character develops in each chapter and how vivid the details are. It keeps me interested instead of boring me out.