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Etiger789
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Bro rob luchi at 13 beat 500 armed soldiers by himself without much difficulty. Yes he had scars on his back from freaking conon balls yet he was still standing and even walked out like it was nothing and proceeded to defeat all the pirates as well. Yet your mc who's trained by some of the best swordsman can't even deal with what 20 people of the most weakest pirates in the weakest sea. And 10 million Berry bounty is barly noteworthy. Sigh and I was really looking forward to reading this. Besides the mc being weak and as the Arthur says weak minded 🙄, the gramer is really good and so is the update stability. Story development is meh so far and so is the charachter. The world is one peice, cliche, yes, but still an amazing world to read about. Especially from different perspectives.

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IwishtoDie22
IwishtoDie22Lv2IwishtoDie22

People dickriding an author so much they chosse to wilingly come up with excuses for bad writing and plotholes will never not be funny.

Nauuu
NauuuLv4Nauuu

Bruh he was 7 years old when he fought the pirates, what do you expect? fighting 20 people when you're 7 is already pretty impressive. I bet even luffy can't beat any of that pirates when he's in that age.

Etiger789
Etiger789Lv15Etiger789

what are you on. Did you even read the chapters properly. He was born in 1495 and got attacked by pirates in 1507 he's clearly 12 going onto 13. And at a young age garp barley trained luffy he didn't take it seriously. And zero was beating adults at an even earlier age. so I ask what are you on about.

Nauuu:Bruh he was 7 years old when he fought the pirates, what do you expect? fighting 20 people when you're 7 is already pretty impressive. I bet even luffy can't beat any of that pirates when he's in that age.
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Anas_Nazim
Anas_NazimLv4Anas_Nazim

Dude just take a chill pill. One Piece have a lot of inconstancy to begin n with. And I don't see any didifferedce, he is in East blue where there aren't any monsters and Lucci was a trained assassin, there's a difference. But you won't get it anyway.

mow
mowLv4mow

Was the mc also not a trained swordsman? lol

Anas_Nazim:Dude just take a chill pill. One Piece have a lot of inconstancy to begin n with. And I don't see any didifferedce, he is in East blue where there aren't any monsters and Lucci was a trained assassin, there's a difference. But you won't get it anyway.