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CYPHER_OCTAGON
CYPHER_OCTAGONLv22yr
2022-03-16 00:14

ok, the novel has vast unlimited potential. that's for sure however the author's representation of that potential is a little underwhelming. I'm, not one to judge on the grammar but it's honestly terrible. The start was also a little off-putting. moving from excited to saddened then crazy. there no stability in the characters thoughts.

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latheef_shaik
latheef_shaikAuthor

the main theme of the story is instability. I apologize for my grammar mistakes. You could suggest anything that can improve the grammar though

Iglirgus
IglirgusLv11

Get an editor and use grammarly, should fix a lot of your grammar issues

latheef_shaik:the main theme of the story is instability. I apologize for my grammar mistakes. You could suggest anything that can improve the grammar though
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