I read until chapter 5 .. It started great but the fact that the MC acts in such a pathetic way makes it impossible for me to continue reading . This is basically a MC which has no trust in his social skills to make a good impression on a girl so he has to fake in such a shameful and pathetic way . It's a shame as I really was expecting a good story..... there are not many Adventure time stories and this is not a good one either..
Chad0ll
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LIKEThen I'll be waiting for that. But please, remember that even a 17-18 old chid would never act in such a shameful way to " attract a girl " . There is a line in which this guy just crossed and crossed....
Chad0ll:Ill be making another one for finn which is probably a lil more up your alley so give me a bitt