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Review Detail of Alvara in The National Goddess Reborn

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Alvara
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I'm a little sad about the story, because the plot and the idea of the story itself is fairly good. However there are so many inconsistencies in this book that it does not flow well and ruins the reader experience. For example it says she has no money and then she goes and pulls out a $100 bill from her pocket. She keeps pulling out her phone, however In the beginning she gave her phone away. Then her phone was smashed and she magically pulled it out of her pocket again. It's like she has a magically appearing phone that never seems to disappear, even though it's repeatedly broken or gone. Honestly I would really enjoy continuing to read this book as I like the plot. But I can't because all of the inconsistencies keep ruining the book. I don't like having to figure out what was supposed to be said while I was reading especially since I shouldn't have to!!!

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The National Goddess Reborn

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