Review Detail of purpl3_fox in The National Goddess Reborn

Honestly, I had great expectations of this novel, but from the first chapter it was pretty obvious it is subpar. Author seems to have attention span and writing ability of a 10year old. While idea is good, flow of the story is all over the place, author jumps from one train of thought to another without proper bridge, all characters no matter the age seem to have a brain of a chicken and rich is made to be the same as super smart/violent/hot. If none of that strikes you as irritating, how about absurdities such as: Dog was stabbed THROUGH THE NECK but sure is still alive; then there's the fight IN THE MIDDLE OF A BANQUET but nobody notices nor does anything about it; the little spoiled rich girl had her wrist broken but not a single tear or a scream is heard; and those are just the first few chapters! Now, translation is pretty decent except for the fact that Middle school mentioned in the novel should be Hight school, because middle school is for kids up to the age of 14, and our protagonist is 18... Anyways, I do not recommend reading this novel. If you're like me and can't stop yourself from reading these kind of overused plots, try something else, there are those better than this, and that's saying something... p.s. Does anybody else find it annoying that 'cool' people have to heave their hands in the pant pockets while walking? Because I've tried it and it's super awkward to walk like that..