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MrRando146
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Writing quility 5/5 it's probably one of the better writing quility in these website although the word count of chapter could be more. It makes it up with its pacing and quility Story development 5/5 so far the story's development has been going pretty smoothly and you don't get the feeling. That just because the plot wants it to happen it happens, plus the pacing and transitions are top tier Character development 5/5 the characters so far have been amazing. The interactions between characters doesn't feel forced but most of all the characters don't feel like card board cut outs Updatating stability 5/5 the update speed has been pretty stable and scheduled World development5/5 although its still pretty early in story. We already get a good bit of information about the world from character conversions and interaction (My rating may change in the future depending on future developments )

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Pokemon: The Medieval Era

Wild_Wine

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Wild_Wine
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Thanks for a detailed review, I am trying to up my word count but its always a problem to break a chapter mid-scene. That's why some chapters are 2500 words while some are 2000, it all depends on when the scene should end😅. I don't want to add some words just to increase the word count, I hope you don't mind it.

MrRando146
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I mean i would rather have a amazing well thought out short chapter than a trashy long one. So just do you ma dude

Wild_Wine:Thanks for a detailed review, I am trying to up my word count but its always a problem to break a chapter mid-scene. That's why some chapters are 2500 words while some are 2000, it all depends on when the scene should end😅. I don't want to add some words just to increase the word count, I hope you don't mind it.
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Did he drop this?