Writing quility 5/5 it's probably one of the better writing quility in these website although the word count of chapter could be more. It makes it up with its pacing and quility Story development 5/5 so far the story's development has been going pretty smoothly and you don't get the feeling. That just because the plot wants it to happen it happens, plus the pacing and transitions are top tier Character development 5/5 the characters so far have been amazing. The interactions between characters doesn't feel forced but most of all the characters don't feel like card board cut outs Updatating stability 5/5 the update speed has been pretty stable and scheduled World development5/5 although its still pretty early in story. We already get a good bit of information about the world from character conversions and interaction (My rating may change in the future depending on future developments )

Great concept. You should never miss a fanfiction such as this Writing is great albeit minor mistakes. Very minor which can almost be ignored. Story development is the best out of any fanfics on this site. Amazing concept, you just immerse into the plot the author writes around Pokemon. Character design is very 3 dimensional. No established character feels irrelevant and no conversation feels forced. Every character has a sense of purpose to move the plot rather than just staying there. Update stability is great with 7 chapters a week for now. The author uploads big enough chapters with around 2500 words so I guess it's more than enough. World background is what keeps you hooked. It has such a unique concept that you almost feel like you are reading an original book. No System, No Harem, No Canon characters, No Team Rocket or any groups but still hooks you with its pace and intriguing plot. I would dare say that it has the potential to be the best pokemon fanfic on any site. Just stick till 12 chapters and you will know why.

Though the author said to wait till one reads 10 chapters, I couldn't stop myself from coming here to give it a 5-star. It has a completely new concept with a brilliant back story. The writing quality is superb. No idea abt the updates but the development is worth waiting for.

hey authorman I reach out seeing it is jan 2023, not for new chaps but moreso any kind of update on if continuing? if not its cool thanks for writing what you did, was fun and unique.

- Unova in 1000 years before canon - Using only gen 5 and lesser - Good grammar (still has minor errors) - Great idea with the Synergy Powers of Trainer and his Teammates Pokemon Types - Maximum 6 Pokemons - Long term training. (Pokemon needs a long time to learn moves, evolve, etc) - There is an Academy Arc.

The novel is great and the grammer is good aswell the story is Interesting and the fact that he made a semi op MC (the ability to teach moves and remembers the various Pokémon) Overall i think this is a very good Pokémon book and has a lot of potential if he doesn’t drop it

Great idea. Can't wait to see it progress.

i realy realyyyy wanna read this but the slow rate of updats make me doubtfull....wht should i do?..........................................................

Very interesting and promising work. I'm just begging you not to stop writing it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]