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shillbear
shillbearLv141yrshillbear

i relly love this fanfic and relly want to see where we go forward negativ system honestly I think it would be better with out it and just make mc a genius learning wise and the stats confuse my brain like mc is relly likable the world dont feel like a copy of one pice that have the same exact story as one pice

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Kan-Gar-Chu! (One Piece fanfic)

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dancematdan
dancematdanAuthordancematdan

The system is just a plot device to move the story along most of the time but many systems make the MC overpowered by just killing a few people or getting some achievement or quest. The problem is that they become overpowered too soon in worlds like One Piece etc so I tried to make a more game based system that helps learn skills and put them to use but the individuals efforts are what get them to where they are in the end. (Instead of the ‘I am a genius at everything because a get level upgrades, skills, devil fruits and special items whenever I do something.’ Trope. not that I am hating on those novels, in fact I love many of the popular ones.) ^^

shillbear
shillbearLv14shillbear

yea I did not think to hard on this one and I agree your system is a lot better than others but I dislike system in general sorry not making that clear in advance

dancematdan:The system is just a plot device to move the story along most of the time but many systems make the MC overpowered by just killing a few people or getting some achievement or quest. The problem is that they become overpowered too soon in worlds like One Piece etc so I tried to make a more game based system that helps learn skills and put them to use but the individuals efforts are what get them to where they are in the end. (Instead of the ‘I am a genius at everything because a get level upgrades, skills, devil fruits and special items whenever I do something.’ Trope. not that I am hating on those novels, in fact I love many of the popular ones.) ^^
dancematdan
dancematdanAuthordancematdan

No it is fine, not everyone likes system novels and the system genre is often overused so it is understandable. Right now I am just using it to assist her in gaining special skills and knowledge to help her grow along with her crew so while it may be mentioned and displayed occasionally, it will not play a huge role later besides showing her current stage of strength.

shillbear:yea I did not think to hard on this one and I agree your system is a lot better than others but I dislike system in general sorry not making that clear in advance