I don't mean to offend or degrade your work. This story was interesting at first but I can summarize this as a rehash of canon with a more decent mc. The grammar is very good though. Keep up the good work.
KnowingAutumn
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LIKEIt has, but definitely by drawing a lot from cultivator novels. It's more of a xuanhuan with Mushoku Tensei's skin now than Mushoku Tensei.
Lordrim:well it started to change now or changed now