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I respect the author for effort into the world building and power level, but this dont change the fact that is extremely bad. you can clearly see he tried to take thing from the manga, a nine and game but in the end he made a complex strange and wlawkward word where is extremely easy and tedious to pokemon to become strong. another thing for this extremely low score isbtahta,while he warned in the first chapter, the other reincarneted guy are completely worthless and dont add anything in the fic, it was better if he single made some unique oc it would be much more interesting. I understand he probaly did have a plan to make these reincarneted individuals much more unique but in the end this was not what the fic promised(many reader show this by abandoning this fic) so he make these character have a much less impact and simple resumed them as another element in the already bad world building. the last and what show me the author personality is how he tag baiting my fellow apprentice brothers(and the rare sisters) of the harem sect by adding the harem tag when mc have only 2 girls and this is not considered a harem but a triangle relationship so author should have used the poligamy tag only. if author add one more girl(or the less expected pokemon) you can simple ignore this last point of mine.

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to clarify, there are many reincarnators other than the first and mc. They helped in shaping the world and multiple gadgets, the first one is just used as a comparison to mc, on the many ways one will approach reincarnation.

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noted

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Blur182AuthorBlur182

problem is, with the recent update, I can't place specific tag like Triangle or Polygamy.