Honestly, it started as one of the best pokemon fanfics in this website. The author didn’t give boons to his protagonist, the later is likeable and not a complete moron. The grammar is also very good....but (there is always a but ) the story contain one the deadliest poisons in writing; other reincarnated characters. Many authors tried, yet they all failed to implement it properly. They either annoy the readers who already grew attached to the protagonist, or are just more interesting than him (so we’d rather hear their story, not his). Authors usually drop their fanfics when they do it, and i’d rather drop it now when i remember it fondly than wait and see it turn out for the worst. Anyway, if you don’t like other reincarnators, don’t read it. If you're okay with it, then go ahead. You’ll like it. Good luck author. I hope you’ll write other stories, you’ve got talent.

It was good at the start but to actually introduced Another reincarnators?? Dude don’t you know the unspoken rules in novels and fanFics? The Mc starts to lose its uniqueness the moment you introduced one.

good so far even though the first 2 chapters only came out 6 hours ago seems like it will be well done -------------------------------------------

for now I'm only giving 3 start because of the massive plot hole author made simple for a forced drama. when your on was dying mc mother could simple use arcanine to reach the ranch in seconds take the potion come back and save the flygon but for some reason mc is the one that go ask for help this all simple to force the plot to go the way author want even ignoring logical choice

I enjoyed reading all of the chapters so far. I didn't find anything wrong with the story or grammar. I also hope the harem won't be more than rosa and hilda.

Ok dont drop this because this have other reincarnator its still pretty good,they act more like a cameo anyways.Most of us hate multiple reincarnator because of metaknowledge in here its not that important.So give it a chance.

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

So I really liked the story. However, I think that having a story that starts has the normal building of a relationships that eventually leads to lemon has the issue of running into the story becoming bland and dry. Now don’t get me wrong I enjoy lemon most like most readers on this platform however, as I have read more and more fanfics I have seen this issue occur many of times. Overall I think the story is well written and that the characters develop well over the length however I think the use of lemon was overdone and lead to less character development.

Yoo i really liked thr story.Idc about reincarnates cause itz poke fanfic and itz not like they got some crazy system.Team dev and battle scenes are also good but the lovedovy parts are a little annoying to read cause its too continuous.Reduce it a little