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DeadliestScout
DeadliestScoutLv52yr
2022-10-26 02:20

honestly it was fine in the first half of the story but after that it just goes downhill. I feel like the mc is getting weaker as time goes, he loses most of his fights and his personality is becoming worse plus the story is making less sense

Pokemon Reincarnation System

FryKnight
3.4
374 Chs

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FryKnight
FryKnightAuthor

Story Development especially in the beginning wasn't great, if you got a problem with a character too bad it likely wont change and the writing quality isn't that bad. Would I recommend you read this, yh it's my story, of course I'll tell you to read it. If there's anything truly worth remembered would be individuals. Don't look at it just from one perspective as this story will show you some from plenty, especially the MC

2yr

Slxxpy
SlxxpyLv13

Warning warning warning. Other characters In the story know of his reincarnation and he is also pushed around by stronger people and abusivsive thots. 👎👎👎👎👎

2yr
DaoistPaleSnow
DaoistPaleSnowLv3

Welp, I am losing braincells reading this, I regret listening to those 5star reviews lol I wonder why they like this? I can only describe the interaction in this story in two words 'Ooga Booga', you will understad once you try reading it.

2yr
Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1

the beginning of the story is very good but the longer the plot gets weirder and harder to understand......... ......................................................................................................................................................... ..........

2yr
Moskov81
Moskov81Lv4

Why does this have a harem tag if the MC is gonna reincarnate as a Pokemon? spoil me please . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

2yr
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv10

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Kenrio
KenrioLv11

I loved the unique stein and the comedy is pretty funny. but the fic is full of grammatical mistakes and break the immersion most of the times. other than the mc all other character are extremely annoying and make difultty to read without hating them,the worse are the AI that make me want to stop read in many times because of her but because she don't appear to much it's tolerable. the one most irritating is risa she is extremely bossy, rude and annoying and for some reason mc take her as his mate( I nearly stopped read in here) another thing I dont like is how much time mc waste being a ratatta completely unecessary author could simple skip but not he goes and make a complete complex plot for mc first life as ratatta I found this extremely unbelievable how high is the level and potential of useles Pokemon like ratatta line and sparrow line even more so when we're talking about the begining of the fic, author already to much information in to little time making a exhaustive read. I really hope he edit and Smith out the chapter and many ridiculous thing that happen. something like a Pokemon with the power to strength the soul and even choose the talent of his offspring should be something coming from a lousy ambipom and a conspirance to kill Pokemon of route all in the first 15 chapters of the fanfic.

2yr
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

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2yr
lolipopp69
lolipopp69Lv4

I don't know what to say this first chapter and I can't understand anything then I try to read more but my head hurts

2yr
GreyHaze
GreyHazeLv13

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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