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Ghost_Playing
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2022-01-09 02:56

There are only two requirements for your story to get popular Author, don’t dissapoint us... . First requirement: Don't add wuxia flavor into your story.(this ruined many storys and I have bad presonal experience with it...) . Second requirement: Don’t drop your novel cause I love it. 🥴😁👍

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merlin_
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I've read a total of two fanfics that made the wuxia element actually make the story better. both times it made those elements just be a part of the power system, like how the MC just used wuxia terms to describe the Level of swordsmanship. or in like Naruto have people be able to do something similar to cultivation with nature energy

Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv14

I can already imagine how rare the situation is which you just described. But since we are already talking about that, do you mind giving me the names of those novels?

merlin_:I've read a total of two fanfics that made the wuxia element actually make the story better. both times it made those elements just be a part of the power system, like how the MC just used wuxia terms to describe the Level of swordsmanship. or in like Naruto have people be able to do something similar to cultivation with nature energy
IsekaiLord
IsekaiLordLv4

he didnt reply and that means he lied. LIAR!

Ghost_Playing:I can already imagine how rare the situation is which you just described. But since we are already talking about that, do you mind giving me the names of those novels?
Dracon_of_Twilight
Dracon_of_TwilightLv1

This maybe late, however to answer one of the two fanfics described - the naruto one - I believe it was the one where naruto has an older sister. I believe if you just go to the naruto tag and scroll down you will see a novel with the picture of a red haired Uzumaki girl linking arms with Anko and Hinata. Hope this help! PS: I don't know about the fanfic describing wuxia terms for describing swordsmanship. Would like to know as well!

Ghost_Playing:I can already imagine how rare the situation is which you just described. But since we are already talking about that, do you mind giving me the names of those novels?
Solare_The_First
Solare_The_FirstLv4

Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister

Dracon_of_Twilight:This maybe late, however to answer one of the two fanfics described - the naruto one - I believe it was the one where naruto has an older sister. I believe if you just go to the naruto tag and scroll down you will see a novel with the picture of a red haired Uzumaki girl linking arms with Anko and Hinata. Hope this help! PS: I don't know about the fanfic describing wuxia terms for describing swordsmanship. Would like to know as well!
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