You know, I won't berate you as this is better than mine but yeah, why do I feel like I've read this before? Then it came to me that it's eerily similar to my fanfic (albeit yours is a lot better than mine seeing that I was 15 when I wrote it) but yeah. You have your own plot and all but I just can't get rid of that feeling that it's the same as mine but VERY different. Never mind this negative rant, it's just that I can't get rid of the "feeling" you know? All in all, it's good fanfic with entertaining segments here and there and I actually enjoyed reading it, so props to you.
Liked it!
LIKEYou're feeling isn't wrong. I got inspired by your fanfics theme of having a ghost type specialist from Alola in Kalos. But I wanted to try some ideas I have and push myself with something I wanted to try, mainly character interactions and personalities, like with giving each pokemon a personality. Though i will admit I haven't written as much due to college.
Again though, your version of this Ghost-type specialist of Alola in Kalos is amazing, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I fully support it!
Asce:You're feeling isn't wrong. I got inspired by your fanfics theme of having a ghost type specialist from Alola in Kalos. But I wanted to try some ideas I have and push myself with something I wanted to try, mainly character interactions and personalities, like with giving each pokemon a personality. Though i will admit I haven't written as much due to college.