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Yoshitaka_Fukuda
Yoshitaka_FukudaLv11yr
2023-03-25 19:35

It’s a pretty decent novel. However as the story progresses plot holes start appearing. The biggest one being the MC has a “panel” system and should be leveling up the fastest which he does. Then out of nowhere everyone else magically catches up to his level instantly. He spends 50+ years training in a time difference space. But his girlfriend spends 1 year and jumps above his level. Speaking of his girlfriend. She would be the second reason this story isn’t as great. It’s starting to focus on her and their love and veering away from the “world traveling” storyline. If those factors above were addressed in a better way, it would be more enjoyable. In the end it’s still worth a read at this point in time.

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Pendulum_
Pendulum_Lv12

Please give mine a try Name: Reincarnation of the Cross

Yoshitaka_Fukuda
Yoshitaka_FukudaLv1

I tried to read it. It was very well written. The problem was it was way too slow paced for my style.

Pendulum_:Please give mine a try Name: Reincarnation of the Cross
Pendulum_
Pendulum_Lv12

No problem, thanks still

Yoshitaka_Fukuda:I tried to read it. It was very well written. The problem was it was way too slow paced for my style.
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

wow its not all that common to find reviews that are done well and arent focused on that one dudes tastes, i read the novel too and had the same thoughts as you. im still annoyed about the mc's long years of hardwork suddenly being over taken so easily, but its understandable considering the guy who made it was just starting and also, the author is really good at making novels 'not once' have i been disappointed and every single one is something i like very much.

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