Review Detail of Ice_Princesss in Real or Not real

This has a calm feel to it so far. I love the first person pov and you did a great job in displaying it. I'm not so good with writing in first person. Anyway, I like Daisy. Each chapter felt like I was reading her diary and seeing the emojis was nice. One thing I suggest is working on your sentence construction. You write your sentences as one, but you should be breaking them into sentences so just work on that. All the best and keep writing!