Review Detail of Daooflaziness in TENSURA: That Time I Abandoned Humanity

Item: TENSURA: That Time I Abandoned Humanity
Rating: 2.8

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DaooflazinessLv22yrDaooflaziness

The story idea itself is good and all but the grammar and the way in which the author is doing this fic makes it seem rushed and not well thought out.

TENSURA: That Time I Abandoned Humanity

Door_kun

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DaooflazinessLv2Daooflaziness

Just to be frank I didn't get farther than a few chapters

2yr

HeeeeadLv1Heeeead

Oh then you haven't seen the wattpad version yet, the grammar and typos on that version was terrible. I'd say this repost version (The author is the same) is a bit better. At least what I noticed is, chapter 1 has changed so much in its grammar, spellings and even the plot shifted a bit. (This happened after your review) Going further, the quality will improve. So if you will, try giving this book another change in the future. But if course, it's up to you.

2yr