Review Detail of WhyNotBacon in Star Wars. Dropped. Why? Story is not consistent enough for webnovels.
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I feel like this could have been a good story but you ruined it with the way you are addressing the mc. Like why didn't you just make up a random name for him and be done with it? It completely ruins the entire story.
Star Wars. Dropped. Why? Story is not consistent enough for webnovels.
Adde_1997
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I agree, however I have now changed the perspective to chapter 1-10 and 16. ch 11-15 will be updated soon. It will be changed from " you,your, yours" to " he, his, him" And the name is very english I´d say. Most of you are native english speakers while Im not, Should I have chosed a swedish one? Im more familiar with Swedish than english.
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Adde_1997:I agree, however I have now changed the perspective to chapter 1-10 and 16. ch 11-15 will be updated soon. It will be changed from " you,your, yours" to " he, his, him" And the name is very english I´d say. Most of you are native english speakers while Im not, Should I have chosed a swedish one? Im more familiar with Swedish than english.