I liked the idea of this story but it just got horrible as the story progressed, the main character had Big Mom’s template and even when it was at 40 something percent he would still lose to a Jonin. And the reason he would lose was because of battle experience which i honestly find to be nonsense, like seriously he may not have the battle experience but someone with her abilities (Soul Fruit,Haki,monstrous strength and defense) should still win. You should’ve made his template progress slower and therefore you wouldn’t have to nerf him so badly.

super good ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

When you said AU you meant it cuz everybody was out of pocket 🤣‼️

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Not the best, but also very recommendable for readers who are looking for a quick refresher. NO BS just fun reading. It would be great if the author continue this,. Pare, tuloy mo na pabitin ka pa

I don’t remember the last time I read something of this magnitude. You’ve created a masterpiece with this. 💓💓💓💓 You’re a wordsmith! I’ve never even heard of half the words you use, and yet I seem to understand every single one of them! Some people think that writing on computers is easy. But I know how difficult it is to come up with ideas and turn them into meaningful and interesting content. Never give up, bro!❤️