Review Detail of SOMMO_ARCANO in Marvel: Abstract entity

Item: Marvel: Abstract entity
Rating: 2.8

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SOMMO_ARCANOLv21yrSOMMO_ARCANO

the story was going pretty well when he was in dc but then in marvel mc it got stupid with a lot of clichés, mc seems to have gotten stupid suddenly and a lot of things get stupid, i think parts are omitted in the story or mc gets nerfed and some are skipped pieces like when he uses the PC and his IP becomes unreachable - invisible, he quietly grabs and hacks sites without programs in a few minutes, the plot becomes forced because of the house and the girl he meets immediately after entering the marvel, honestly it seems that there they were 2 different authors for the story

Marvel: Abstract entity

Kitshaar

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KitshaarAuthorKitshaar

It's true that honesty hurts but I needed that. Thanks for pointing it out. I will try to think more carefully about the plot from now on.

1yr

KitshaarAuthorKitshaar

That's for pointing out a proper constructive problem about the book. If you the still reading the book, just want to say that I will try to salvage the situation in the next chapter I will upload by providing a good reason on why did he do what he did after coming into the marvel universe.

1yr

KitshaarAuthorKitshaar

*Thanks( that's ) If you *are still reading the book

Kitshaar:That's for pointing out a proper constructive problem about the book. If you the still reading the book, just want to say that I will try to salvage the situation in the next chapter I will upload by providing a good reason on why did he do what he did after coming into the marvel universe.

1yr

machinadeorumLv3machinadeorum

wow, that is the first time I saw an author actually accept criticism. I going to read this fic.

Kitshaar:It's true that honesty hurts but I needed that. Thanks for pointing it out. I will try to think more carefully about the plot from now on.

1yr