The grammar is horrendous. Some stuff doesn't make sense and somehow there's random chinese names mixed up. Example, Naruto XiaoXiao. Like who tf is that?

its seem straight from MTL but for other reader to understand here some references; Master Naruto = Third Hokage Xi Rihong/Red = Kurenai Yuhi Hope the author/editor can edit it so more reader can understand more and read enjoyable. Currently at Chapter 8

has a potential BUTTTTTTT chinese bs random chinese slurs bs random chinese uncle bs some time the dialogue is not writtnoen well some sentence looks like it came from mtl unreadable paragraphs chinese names instead of Japanese/english name some character. think more like chinese bruh

The idea of the story is good, but the translation and grammar are absolutely terrible and it makes it hard to read. If the author spent a little time and went back over to change the things that are messed up in the translation that would save everything, but all they do is correct it in the chapter comments which is a waste, just change it in the chapter itself, not the comments.

Pretty good, not without drawbacks, of course, by the type of strange Chinese names that slip here and there, but I was intrigued........................

Copy and pasted from mtlnation, zero corrections were made.

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J'adore l'intrigue de cette histoire. Merci pour les chapitres, une publication aussi soutenue est parfaite pour un grand lecteur comme moi.

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