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LanduoLv143yr
2021-12-12 19:22

It's an awesome start and a novel idea but the translation if it is one...is horrible, it's not unreadable (barely) but for me I can't read the grammar it's past my line of bad grammar but still readable of 46/100 I can push through but I won't, though I can't deny it's a great story but grammar kills it for me. Overall it's great! (for me after I stopped)

KONOHA EXPERIMENTAL BODY,I BUILD AN INVISIBLE EMPIRE IN THE NINJA WORK

SAINT_GABRIEL
4.5
50 Chs

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SAINT_GABRIEL
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I am very sorry about this ,but i am afraid this all I can with a google translator as I am not chinese nor i can understand it, so once again i am sorry

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Landuo
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No worries man, I don't know how to read Chinese and my English is also not that good. The stories great and not worst google translated work I've read, some got me to quit by just reading it's synopsis.

SAINT_GABRIEL:I am very sorry about this ,but i am afraid this all I can with a google translator as I am not chinese nor i can understand it, so once again i am sorry
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People write a lot of chapters and strain their hands. I wonder why they don't strain their minds a little. A fan like this is great but it's spoiled by haste, I also don't understand why all Naruto fans should start their stories by killing Danzo. I understand it's very dangerous, but it's also the most important element of Naruto story, I think the best time To get rid of Danzo in the story is after Sarutobi death

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