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Writing Quality: 5☆ I don't count bad english or typos in these kind of reviews as they don't change the story, can always be edited and judging the authors english over small things like that is just unreasonable. Story Development: 5☆ Even before any real big story development is made you can sometimes tell that it is good, and this is the case here too. If in these 12 chapters there would have been a big change, it would have already been bad in stories like this, so it is already good that, while you can already look in the future a little in the first chapter, there is no big change yet. The 'introduction chapter' tells you that in the next chapter from now there will definitely be some development in the next chapter. In other words, the pace of the story is well done. Character Design: 5☆ Not much to say. In chapter 3 or 4 (I don't quite remember) we will be introduced to Ayane and we can already tell that she has a very special character and a very elaborate character design. Following that we get a glimpse of the reason for mc's attitude, which already hint on great character design for him. Later on in chapter 11 if I remember correctly, we get introduced to a student called Dracula as her surname. We also get a little explaination about the name and have a moment with her. While it was only speculation, I have made a comment at the end of the chapter that I have put my thoughts about her character in, and the fact that I was able to think of so many things already shows that she most likely also has a pretty special character on top of the bit that we already know. Somewhere we get a flashback to the prophecy and can see that even almost irrelevant background characters, such as the sage, don't lack personality, which is something I have only seen in 1 other novel for a just one character to be frank. If rating this 6☆ would be an option, I would choose it. Respect +1, sir author! Updating Stability: 4☆ My sense of time us very bad, but (correct me if I'm wrong) I am pretty sure that, even tho we got daily chapter (I think at least...), the time in which they get uploaded isn't uniform. World Backround: 5☆ Thank the god of fate, WE FINALLY GOT SOMETHING NEW AND AT LEAST A LITTLE ORIGINAL!!!

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My Students Are Vampires!

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man, you've been always a good and helpful reader for me umu, I'm so bias toward you. If i can rate a reader I WILL rate you 11/5. Thanks for the time spent umu umu

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Little_Foxxy:man, you've been always a good and helpful reader for me umu, I'm so bias toward you. If i can rate a reader I WILL rate you 11/5. Thanks for the time spent umu umu