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StarkJr
StarkJrLv52yr
2022-03-25 04:04

This novel is horrible. If you like strong and independent female lead, this novel is not for you. It is infuriating how weak and submissive the female lead is. I already read up to chapter 86, and the male lead is not using his brain and ruining her reputation in school by publicly buying her luxury goods, leading to others thinking that she has a sugar daddy. At this point, he is basically a pedo sugar daddy showering a minor with money. Seeing that the novel is not getting any better, I'm dropping this. If I can rate this 0, I definitely would!

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hmm. ..

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Daoist0e3fbiLv10

yea. I was really frustrated reading it

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I love honest reviews like this it really helps

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Wallflower_Monk
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It's a cute novel💕. FL is reborn and realizes that she is living in a novel and written as a villainess character. In this life she wants to live a good life. Spoilers: The FL is both pityful and strong. She's like a contradiction, but you can understand it. In 20 chapters she has cried quite a few times and I admit it annoyed me a bit at times, but given her past life experiences and her age it's understandable. When she was 18 she was found by her biological parents - a rich family. However they treated her like a servant and not a daughter. At the age of 20 she dies of cancer and is reborn to 18 years old. She has not experienced much of the world and is a bit naive and sheltered. She meets the ML who becomes her saviour and is the first person to treat her well. The ML doesn't trust her at first because many women try to scheme their way into his life, but after a while he begins to trust her. He dotes on her and protects her - they're cute together so far 💜. The FL, while often teary-eyed does speak up and defend herself though. She's not 100% dependant on the ML which is good. She has her own backbone. The rest of the characters, like her family, are ignorant and nonsensible. Their way of thinking and acting is very illogical. I suppose it's because they are characters in a novel, within a novel. To make a Matrix reference, unlike the FL, her family continues to take the blue pill and can't get out of their character setting. They are frankly annoying 😅. Unfortunately this leads to illogical and over-the-top events happening in the story. Like smacking a girl in public or hitting people over the head with a wine bottle🙈. I wish the novel explained and focused more of the luck aura she gets from the ML. Maybe it will in the future, but so far this aspect of the novel has been neglected. Overall, it's cute and enjoyable.

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