Review Detail of DeepThinkingBanana in She Is From The Countryside

I like the plot and I was excited to see how it goes. BUT I just can't stomach the editing of this story. The grammar, sentence casing, capitalization and even the names changed. I don't really use my brain much, and having to read these foreign names which I can't distinguish the gender and add to the fact that there are mixed up with the pronouns used, I can'f go on.[img=sad] Please fix it! It's already completed.