Review Detail of HuubaX_Shooter in Super Necromancer System
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it's very good but there are too many plot holes so I am dropping it for example the exp is sometimes just forgotten or bad calculated or even where his revenge for his familiy isn't a restrain to become a lich it had a lot of potential but I can't stand this but it's overall very good aside from that
Super Necromancer System
John_Doever
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I am pretty surprised that I got a response and an explanation. Thank you it does sound stupid but I will continue reading it because you take in criticism and respond to it accrodingly.
John_Doever:Just to address this, the system is basically completely secondary to the plot. I write with the plot first and then work the numbers around to fit it, so the numbers in the system have little to no relevance at all to the story itself. I'll probably have an editor or someone go through to make sure the numbers line up but the story won't change at all. You could literally completely ignore the numbers because it just has no real relevance to the story, which I know triggers some readers who really read for the numbers grind, but for me the system/numbers were just there to prompt me to write, not force me to write for it. And the family revenge thing could have been cleared up a lot more, but he wants to specifically take out the ones that caught and tortured his parents, the entire organization itself is something he has as a goal but it isn't a burning personal vendetta, so it doesn't count. I can just go back and add in a paragraph or two to make that clearer.
Just to address this, the system is basically completely secondary to the plot. I write with the plot first and then work the numbers around to fit it, so the numbers in the system have little to no relevance at all to the story itself. I'll probably have an editor or someone go through to make sure the numbers line up but the story won't change at all. You could literally completely ignore the numbers because it just has no real relevance to the story, which I know triggers some readers who really read for the numbers grind, but for me the system/numbers were just there to prompt me to write, not force me to write for it. And the family revenge thing could have been cleared up a lot more, but he wants to specifically take out the ones that caught and tortured his parents, the entire organization itself is something he has as a goal but it isn't a burning personal vendetta, so it doesn't count. I can just go back and add in a paragraph or two to make that clearer.