Review Detail of Zabne123 in Apocalypse Cheater

Item: Apocalypse Cheater
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

Zabne123Lv158mthZabne123

I really like the story and I was excited about the main character actually telling someone the truth in the beginning but I can't read it anymore because of the non stop descriptions on everything. It's like you went and found every word you could to describe one single thing every paragraph. Sometimes it gets so bad you take up a whole chapter. If you could dial it down then I think you have something here.

Apocalypse Cheater

ADboy245

Liked by 12 people

Replies5

Godfred_DavidLv4Godfred_David

yeah, you really should try to tone it down.

1mth

Canon_FodderLv4Canon_Fodder

can't agree more chapte 40 is the max i can endure , i feel my blood pressure rising while reading the same thing in different ways over and over , u can literally resume 40 chapter in 10 chapters max

7mth

Zabne123Lv15Zabne123

The story itself had some good potential too so I was really bummed about it.

Canon_Fodder:can't agree more chapte 40 is the max i can endure , i feel my blood pressure rising while reading the same thing in different ways over and over , u can literally resume 40 chapter in 10 chapters max

7mth

solo_leveling_godLv4solo_leveling_god

one piece???

2mth

ImStill_A_JanitorLv4ImStill_A_Janitor

Don't read Gravity Mage then.

21d