Item: Clan Cultivation: I Transmigrated With My Smartphone
Rating: 1
Author: Mute

MuteLv133yr

2022-03-06 17:23

The author writes like a child, he tells and doesn't show, it's literally "The MC did this, the MC did that, cue timeskip" every character is poorly written and it's like reading robots interacting.

Clan Cultivation: I Transmigrated With My Smartphone

The Lost of Carthage

3.9

40 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies5

Saad_YousufLv4

Thanks for your honesty opinion.I decided not to read this novel that you rated trash

3yr

MuteLv13

It's free so i think you should give it a shot, you'll know after reading a few chapters if you're okay with the writing.

Saad_Yousuf:Thanks for your honesty opinion.I decided not to read this novel that you rated trash

3yr

Saad_YousufLv4

No thanks.I don't read a novel where story development is trash and the writing skills of the author is down to earth.No matter how good the concept of the novel is.Besides you yourself rated this novel trash

3yr

MuteLv13

I did rate this trash, and i believe it, but we all have different opinions on what is good and bad:)

Saad_Yousuf:No thanks.I don't read a novel where story development is trash and the writing skills of the author is down to earth.No matter how good the concept of the novel is.Besides you yourself rated this novel trash

3yr

SCP3812Lv3

all the other trial reads are worse in terms of story anyway though, smh

3yr

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