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Quite enjoyable book which captures RPG elements quite well. Yes, it has game elements which many have, but it also has a proper application which most lacks. I am okay with everything about this novel despite one thing, the writing. Especially the words, I have seen a lot of content with hi-fi/cold words, but they usually remain on an editorial page or some research paper. This novel is using many words which have popular synonyms, but author refuses to use them: gravitas which also mean seriousness, Gryphon which also means a griffin, lackadaisical which also means just lazy, incredulous which means just stunned or doubtful, and list goes on forever as I included only a few words in first 3 chapters. Maybe, I am the only one who feels that these words are quite cold but anyway this is my review.
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I am not saying that they are bad or so. I am just concerned that considering the audience we have here, actually most of them, may not have English as even their third language. Just use words which will impact the readers the most, not the ones you like the most; I got this tip from some great courses and each of them said same thing: Use the words which are most impactful to the readers be it a novel or a business report or a case.
OverturningSeas:I'll try to make it easier but the sad fact of the matter is that for me those words just make more sense. If it helps I haven't looked up a thesaurus in about 5-6 years, XD. I'll do my best and thanks for the input.
Leon19:I am not saying that they are bad or so. I am just concerned that considering the audience we have here, actually most of them, may not have English as even their third language. Just use words which will impact the readers the most, not the ones you like the most; I got this tip from some great courses and each of them said same thing: Use the words which are most impactful to the readers be it a novel or a business report or a case.