Review Detail of SOMMO_ARCANO in DXD SI: It's Me, DIO!
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nice story and nice concept but too many parts skipped and not explained, each chapter seems a bit disconnected,op character, good development but too many time jumps, i haven't read other author fanfiction so i don't know who mc is so just reading i have a bit of trouble connecting some things
DXD SI: It's Me, DIO!
JManM
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Sorry to here that the pace was too much for you. You may have noticed that almost every chapter starts with dialogue or character interactions. My writing style is near entirely character driven. I don't really do info drops, journal entries, navel gazing, or elaborate settings. I also try to keep to at least one plot advancement per thousand words. Was the reading flow fun, or were you too hung up on the things that confused you? There is a sweet spot to be found, but remember that this was a sequel so please discount confusion based on skipping three novels worth of previous content and just let me know if the DxD content confused you.
the story was funny but i think the problem is the writing style and the few descriptions with too many skips, there was some problem connecting various chapters like when mc went to do suddenly or when mc does one thing in a chapter the next one is completely detached and you can't quite connect the text, however your story is very good if you do more descriptions and fewer jumps it would be even better I hope u continue this novel
JManM:Sorry to here that the pace was too much for you. You may have noticed that almost every chapter starts with dialogue or character interactions. My writing style is near entirely character driven. I don't really do info drops, journal entries, navel gazing, or elaborate settings. I also try to keep to at least one plot advancement per thousand words. Was the reading flow fun, or were you too hung up on the things that confused you? There is a sweet spot to be found, but remember that this was a sequel so please discount confusion based on skipping three novels worth of previous content and just let me know if the DxD content confused you.
JManM:Sorry to here that the pace was too much for you. You may have noticed that almost every chapter starts with dialogue or character interactions. My writing style is near entirely character driven. I don't really do info drops, journal entries, navel gazing, or elaborate settings. I also try to keep to at least one plot advancement per thousand words. Was the reading flow fun, or were you too hung up on the things that confused you? There is a sweet spot to be found, but remember that this was a sequel so please discount confusion based on skipping three novels worth of previous content and just let me know if the DxD content confused you.
Monocle_GentleSir:You said that this is the sequel what is the first story I wanna start there.