I am SCREAMING where has this book been please?! I love the MC because he is so far from a 2D character design; The writing holds actual presence, an actual person in these words with a rawness of a really great character build and almost ensured potential. I can’t wait!!

So... Where should I begin? The story looks interesting and I notice that the author did try describing the characters and the setting so we, readers, could imagine it. The problem with this was that the author over-described (if that's a word) both things. It made the story confusing instead of making it clear. The second thing is punctuation and grammar. There are too many run-off sentences while describing the characters. Use periods and commas. They are your friends. Also, use a grammar corrector program like Grammarly or just write your draft in MS Word so it corrects the mistakes before you post the story. Remember, good grammar can captivate the audience in this sea of stories. I do think that with a bit of polishing and editing, your story could go far.

I will now be posting on Monday Wednesday and Friday I am not being lazy I am writing everyday but I don’ want to stress to much on chapters and provide the best I can thanks for all the support in the form of cries even tho I doubt ya are real but if you are [click here to make sure ur not a robot: power stones]:

Okay so I believe that the story has potential. However, the first thing I noticed which I feel is incorrect is your title. Why not try changing the title to this instead: Man, Monster, or God? . I suggest this because your title has a punctuation error as the comma's and question marks clash. Also, try using Grammarly to check for grammatical and punctuation errors, that way your sentences will flow smoothly. Overall, keep up the good work.

I enjoy the story, and I enjoy the plot. It would be better if you could use the grammar checkers like Grammarly or type in Microsoft Word or Google Docs because they automatically point out the grammatical mistakes. Overall, the story is amazing.

I believe the story is quite good but the world lore should be explained a bit more as that would lay quite a good foundation for the later chapters. Overall, I find the story quite good.

Mc is pretty stupid but the story is okay, stupid as in his system literally has no data, he ask a question and system says it needs more data, mc says its useless , he sleeps with one girl and is surprised to find out she wasn't doing it because she fell for him but because she's training a technique 🤦🏾‍♂️. he's not just the brightest but still okay ig

Man.. I like it. The title already made me wondering what's the novel about, and when I dive it the story, it's a worth one. Although there are some minor mistakes, the story itself has a great potential. Keep it up! Good luck.

The story is so good and promising-looking for more to come and the plot is really interesting and I can't wait for the new chapter thank you