Fast paced but lack of emotions, other people act like npc which make the conversation a bit cringe, the grammar is not too bad but ain't that good either. I do hope that author can slow it down and give the story a bit of life. The idea is nice, just need to improve the storyline and the conversation between mc and other people.
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