I gotta say this fic has truly blown my expectations due to the massive improvement in the grammar aspect. At the beginning, it was kind of hard to read but after a month or so of stockpilling the chaps, I'm astonished of good the vocab and grammar has become. Finding a good harem douluo fic is very hard and with a logical mc. Also the author truly knows how to satisfied his readers by including Xiao Wu in the harem because seriously that pairing is nearly impossible to find because almost every fanfic has her with Tang San. I can say this fic has great potential and I would like to see how far it can go. Also the author should really look into the update stability of this fic although I'm not talking about his mourning in the last few days, I'm talking about the overall updates speed.

This story is just your basic overpowered capturing women like Pokémon story. There literally nothing good about not the writing the character or the interactions I’m starting to wonder if the author paid for the reviews

I love this fanfic so far and I hope the promise of an excellent fan-fiction gets fulfilled. I am amazed this was written by someone who is using a translator to convert from the authors native language to english.

This fanfic has so so much potential and I just cant wait how things gonna turn out. Get a somewhat simular vibe from Douluo: Stealing the Ten Thounsand Realms but with a more mature and of higher quality tune. So far so good. Please keep updating this!!! I believe if this rhymth is maintain, it will become one of the best Douluo fanfic, if not the best. The only fly in the oitment is the update frequency though. Its not too slow but its not enough for the insatiable me😞

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please update more atleast 20/day I really appreciate this novel. my favourite is Haven chains & golden 🦁 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I like this fanfic. And I hope the update will be faster and the story will be more exciting in the future,,, I support your work, keep the spirit of the author..... hehehe

I really like this story, the pace is not too slow yet not too fast so reader can enjoy everything at their own speed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Very good fanfic!!!👍🤩😍,,I didn't really expect it at first but when I continued it became more and more exciting, keep spirit and continue author!! 😘🥰