Review Detail of ButDidEyeDie in Mahanon Winters

Quite biased of me since I really should not be giving this since it's still only two chapters but... really played a lot of DA:O and Awakening. Which are some of the games I really poured literal months in playing. I think you should have an aux chapter detailing the difference of the elves in DA:I to other usual elves. Anyways, actually too early for me to give my comment about anything since it is just two chapters. I hope you continue and not give up on writing till you finish this story. Good luck!