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Review Detail of Enigmation in TVD/TO: The Original Wolf

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Enigmation
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I usually try to write a detailed review but I just can't this time. This ff is very divisive. Try reading the first 5 or 10 chps to see if it's for you. Personally, the grammar and misspelling is bearable, it's not absolutely unreadable but certainly several mistakes are present. Now this is where I just went nope I'm out to this story. I can bear quite a substantial amount of cringe and edginess, but this one. Ohhh boy, the amount of cringe just sapped the life out of me. I couldn't continue past chp6 or so. The idea and setting is good enough but the execution and portrayal of the MC as some kind of Original Alpha Wolf is not entirely correct. His personality is unbefitting for one and rarely acts his age, in fact he's very very playful in an obnoxious and unfunny way. TLDR; Try to read first few chps, if u can bear the cringe, you're in for a fic that is read to past time, not because it's amazing.

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TVD/TO: The Original Wolf

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