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Characters are dull and have no depth, this guy has thick plot armor whenever he has to talk to someone, they always believe him, do what he says, they always say how he's perfect and chooses the best method super duper quick. Gwen and Grandpa Max are soooo robotic in this story. Grammar is a low priority for this author considering that words are missing sometimes and they spoken English is very basic at best.
Alexander Benjamin Tennyson (Ben 10 Fanfic)
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When I first read this comment I thought you were just hating then. I read the story and found out you’re right he builds a harem with no work and picks up a girl they just met who also joins the harem they knew her for like 1 week at most and everyone fully trust her like she’s part of the family the whole time whenever he does anything that would get a reaction out of people there’s no negative reaction it’s like the plot IS his armor fully
Kono_phineas_da:When I first read this comment I thought you were just hating then. I read the story and found out you’re right he builds a harem with no work and picks up a girl they just met who also joins the harem they knew her for like 1 week at most and everyone fully trust her like she’s part of the family the whole time whenever he does anything that would get a reaction out of people there’s no negative reaction it’s like the plot IS his armor fully