Review Detail of TheAligatorFam in Alexander Benjamin Tennyson (Ben 10 Fanfic)

It is because he asked for a perfect body with no toxines idiot

idiot hair on your armpits is to ease friction so the your skin does not constantly rub against itself

Also the hairs retain the liquid to prevent it from dripping as it happens on the back

though i have yet to read it but I think those are one of the many concerns of a boy going through puberty.

This is one of the dumbest things to rate a story low for I've ever seen.

that tells me of you standards... if he did it once what's stopping him from doing it again?

Irrelevant stuff often gets ignored or looked over in books. Some of the mistakes appear in most popular books. Do you just stop reading a book when you encounter the first plot hole if you even notice it?

it depends on the plot hole but yes, the wizard of Oz a hp fanfic was great but it had huge plot hole so i could not make it farther than chapter 44

Understandable, but I did ask for a reason. The reason stated in the review seems irrelevant to me. Unless the author spent a bunch of time on it or you really did repeatedly run into it, it seems like an irrelevant reason to rate so low.

I read a few mor chapters after that one and it was just ok not great, because I am the type of person why gets irritated quickly if I see misinformation, misleading, and holes in stories so I just could not get over it, my mind makes me do thing over so many themes I can't even begin to tell you why I could not read more u just could not

oh and to keep your oder because females are genet8cly attracted to oder, we are very similar to animals

Exactly, these people will give 5 stars to a trashcan with a sticker of Ben 10 on it that sometimes makes a random noise and they call it a masterpiece. Literally can never look at the comments to see if something is good, all I see is emojis or saying it's amazing. At least when I see the emojis spam I know what I'm getting into most of the time. Sometimes it's good and most of the time it's not, this is one of those "most"

after reading even the current chapters, this comment It is invalid

would literally have not guessed english wasn't his 2nd language tbh? i think he edited them all heavily so the plot shines through now.

he's reincarnated, not normal kid

The author literally said they don't know English at all and is using Google Translate. But I suppose you didn't care enough to read the description for a few seconds to know that.

🤔 but women remove all the hair from below the nose.

we will always be animals. It's in our very DNA as well as the actions we take on a daily basis or the subconscious decision to talk to strangers all stem from your animalistic ancestors and desire to be a pack animal. Denying what you are doesnt change the reality.

what a ridiculous response. The kind of thing a child would say when they have no way to refute me.

I dont need to test anything were part of the ANIMAL kingdom. Youd have to be the densest person I've ever met if you think you're not an animal.