Writing Quality: Little to no grammar mistakes and if there is one, it wouldn't hinder your reading experience. what more could you ask for? Story Development: Seems like the revenge type from what I have read but even if it was, it was quite good. the genre is executed very well. Character Design: I can't comment much about the mc other than he isn't one dimensional that only spoke his dialogues. He is a prodigy and he acted like one. But even so, he makes mistakes and that was makes him human. Very realistic. Updating Stability: Author will update daily. I bet my money on it. After all, author wouldn't want to miss the MGS money. World Background: Set up in a fantasy world and the readers are given snippets of the world the mc is in so it isn't info dump which is excellent. Overall: This novel is my cup of tea and I like it. I can say that the novel is underrated. Quite similar to my novel that has low views and collections but is quite good. In other words, this novel is a must read. I believe that nothing is perfect so this novel doesn't get five stars.

Author here! This book of mine has finally stepped on its 101st chapter. In relation to that, I want to thank everyone for their supports! Especially those who criticized my work and point out my errors. Thank you very much! My growth is all thanks to you! Also, I'm quite excited to announce that the real plot is going to take place soon. It can be said that the previous 100 chapters were considered as my exploratory phase. I think I've practiced enough, and it's time to start the real deal. Including this book, I'm going to publish a new one too. Let's go for the challenge!

I like it but my goodness is this MC annoying please author fix him this guy says hes done with business and wants to make meaningful connections but his goals are to build anothe business empire and return to earth to get revenge and everytime a piece of gold is in his path he goes crazy for it especially the test that he had for the treasure room or the cat, he has to be forced to take the cat when before he even had this test he said if something like that would happen he wouldn't choose the wealth

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I overall liked the story until the MC becomes this slave that is dragged around all the time and ultimately doesn’t do anything business related nor grow his “empire” that he planned on creating. Maybe the story will progress more but my personal preference when I go into stories that make the MC seem like he will be better and ultimately makes him a slave it’s not my cup of tea. But overall it’s pretty good other than the character.

The story isn't perfect but it's enjoyable, might be my standards tho. writing quality is good, I don't think the story is too fast or slow, but 2 chapters a week obviously isn't enough but I guess the author must be going through it. The mc is just so inconsistent, Don't even get me started on how he's just getting dragged along in the story by the system, it's the reason he's a slave rn. Mc just keeps getting slapped around by everyone for no apparent reason. Even tho it say he custom designed the system it's obvious he just made an ability and put it an already existing template. Well at least the world background is very unique and interesting, it is simply a wonderful concept.

There are some grammar errors, but the writing is both simple and descriptive, which I like very much. I think it works well for this type of story. The story is also fast paced and gets right to the action and adventure. I like that the MC doesn't take himself too seriously. Even though he's experienced betrayal, he's still somewhat light-hearted.

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The Valentines Day chapter deserves 10/5 stars alone. I really enjoyed reading the character development. I definitely need more backstory. The system intrigues me and I am curious to see how you use it going forward. This shall stay in my library dungeon for future reading. Plz update lots so I may binge it.