kinda dislike the way author write the story, the writing style is just meh, especially the monologue, feels awkward. it's like reading rpg's battle log, something like that. ex: Andrew do A x times Andrew do B after A also, the standard writing style also weird, using {" .... "} instead of just '....' for monologue. pls just stick to normal writing standard, if you want to your own writing standard, at least explain it at chapter 1 what each symbol mean. mind you, i only read first few chapters, i don't have the motivation to read the rest of the chapters because it's just not fun for me, because reasons above. i hope author fix this problem and rewrite entire novel if the style is still the same until latest chapters. i have high hope, this novel has high potential. that's my only critics, other than that it's good.
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