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2022-03-13 18:20

at first, the story is good but it downgraded when suddenly the author suddenly change his troupe to a medieval fantasy world where demon lord, heroes, knights mages to a cultivation like novel, you know the usual troupe where he meets the mysterious grandpa in the park with his granddaughter practicing but the MC criticized the girl martial art in his head and the girl notice throw an almost tantrums but grandpa stop her and MC sat on the tree cultivate grandpa notices his cultivation amaze and etc etc where MC show his might, go to the auction face slap like usual in the eastern cultivation novel, maybe there'll be a youngmaster, the offend, kill, offend again then kill again

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The_Anonymous_User
The_Anonymous_UserLv4

its literally a waste of time

The_Anonymous_User
The_Anonymous_UserLv4

and author my advice to you, a medieval fantasy can't just mash up to a cultivation fantasy suddenly, because it doesn't just add up, and mana cultivation is just plain stupid, even the Chinese novel troupe where there is mysterious grandpa, young master and etcetc. so author, please be original, it is a very excellent and creative novel but the chinese troupe is already old and repetitive

The_Anonymous_User
The_Anonymous_UserLv4

and don't misunderstand author, this is my first time criticizing intensly, after all i love this novel but you ruined it up with the chinese troupe

Faith_8324
Faith_8324Lv1

if you are making a comment don't include any dpoilers

The_Anonymous_User
The_Anonymous_UserLv4

i didnt include spoiler, that just my speculation at the beginning, and when i read, it seems im right

Faith_8324:if you are making a comment don't include any dpoilers
SquirrelFlyTree
SquirrelFlyTreeLv4

You have a *spoiler warning* option in your reviews section, but that isnt on rn so people can see spoilers in the review without knowing.

DaoistZenCrow
DaoistZenCrowLv3

It's not really a medieval fantasy though??... It's only the MC's old world, which btw is only rarely mentioned and only in passing. This novel is primarely an evolution cultivation novel. And about that grandpa and his niece...yeah, I agree. That segment was almost a complete knock-off of one part of Urban Cultivator. But here, it does lead to progress his goals in a meaningful way, in which MC intended. MC is portrayed as a smart, ruthless killing machine. Smart part sometimes wavers though. And he loves to portray himself as a monster he really is..but he does know the need for subtlety(sometimes).

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Hello! I know, I know, shameless self-review... but hey, anything else would only be hypocrisy on my part... why would anyone rate his own work as anything but close and dear to his heart? Anyway, I wouldn't want to spoil too much but figured some of my planned thoughts (at the time of writing this, the novel has just been posted) would serve as a good indication if you would like to give the story a try, or mayhaps not. Both are fine, and while I would miss you, my dear potential reader, in case you would decide to abandon me, I would respect your decision. At the very least, please give me the courtesy of telling me the reason, so I could continue to drive myself forward and improve! Writing is not just my passion, but currently, in these dark times, my only solace! --- When you check in for the first few chapters, you might grow confused and ask yourself: "Is this really a modern day, urban fantasy story? Why are we starting from the prehistoric era then? What is going on? Relax, my dear potential friend, there is nothing wrong! The first few chapters, serving as a sort of first mini-arc, will be playing out in the far past, showing an initial journey of self-growth and introduction to Aziel as an individual. I do not plan to push it for too long, but there are a few interesting ideas that were never explored in these novels, and I had this itch... As for the rest, this novel being a genuine submission for WPC #238 you may have an idea of where we are going. If not, or if you are reading this far in the future (...how's it there by the way? Is this stupid pandemic still raging on?), then allow me to copy the contest details here, as it would speak more without spoiling anything. "Male Lead - Strong Acting Weak Don't judge a book by its cover. Someone who seems weak and pathetic might just turn out to be an almighty person concealing his overwhelming strength."

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