Review Detail of BASTILLE in My Demonic Contract
Review detail
THIS IS GOOD. There is so much potential here, Good grammar, unique plot, very nice development. The way things are progressing is smooth and easy to understand. Female leads also have a personality.(which is quite uncommon for this time of novel). Little tragedy in the beggining but i don’t think there will be more. Check this novel out and you won’t regret it.
My Demonic Contract
Ribblood
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I’m glad you are enjoying the novel so far. I do try my best with grammar and such as I have read too many good novels get ruined in such a way. My writing can also improve, such as giving a better description of the surroundings so the readers can easily imagine what is happening within the text. There will be more tradgy but I won’t be throwing it willy nilly. For there to be happy moments, there must always be despressing moments to give weight to the happy ones.
Ribblood:I’m glad you are enjoying the novel so far. I do try my best with grammar and such as I have read too many good novels get ruined in such a way. My writing can also improve, such as giving a better description of the surroundings so the readers can easily imagine what is happening within the text. There will be more tradgy but I won’t be throwing it willy nilly. For there to be happy moments, there must always be despressing moments to give weight to the happy ones.
Thanks for letting me know about that tag, I didn’t even see it last time. I don’t want to spoil too much but there will be a big chapter gap between each tradgy event. So you won’t need to worry about another one anytime soon.
BASTILLE:Well, i hope you can add the “tragedy” Tag aswell as make the tragic moments briefimage
Ribblood:I’m glad you are enjoying the novel so far. I do try my best with grammar and such as I have read too many good novels get ruined in such a way. My writing can also improve, such as giving a better description of the surroundings so the readers can easily imagine what is happening within the text. There will be more tradgy but I won’t be throwing it willy nilly. For there to be happy moments, there must always be despressing moments to give weight to the happy ones.