Hello, the shameless author here. This story is going to be short-paced at first, but nothing’s gonna be there just to fill empty words. I’ve crafted a complete, unique world with fantastic elements barely explored in many other settings. If you expect a bland and generic fantasy world with little to no background, this story is not for you. There’s gonna be lots of powers, action, combat, and training, as well as a living world full of rich cultures, factions, and personalities, each with its own customs, traditions, history, religion, and interests, which you will enjoy discovering and learning about, as the MC is foreign to them, just like you. Overally, it’s a weak-to-strong story with soft reincarnation and some cultivation elements that I’m sure you will enjoy reading. I filled a whole notebook planning it and writing its elements! And that’s without counting the plotline. Don’t be shy and leave your comments! Readers are as important as writers to novels.

The writing quality and story development are good. The story narration is also according to my taste. Grammar isn't an issue here. Overall, it's good.

Descriptions are this novel's strength. Descriptions of environments, character interactions and actions are well done. The world background is also given well in dialogue so it doesn't feel too much like it's just told to the reader.

What a talented Author this author is, he /she really did a good job in jotting this down keep this up will continue to read more chapters I love the characters especially William 🤭or maybe got a crush lol . What a masterpiece 💯✔️

A detailed way of narrating. The scenes were shown and were not just outright told. The characters were lifelike and were not just cardboard cutouts. The story is well planned and written! The Mc is cool too! Loved it ❤️

This is definitely a masterpiece. The plot and setting takes you into a completely different world. Just the first few chapters and it's this hard to drop. The character design is completely unique. I'll be waiting more chapters.

its very good like extremely good the story pacing is good info dumps are bearable i have red only a few ch so quick qs is there romance or yanderes you get da point

Excellent writing, movielike narrating, proper world building and lifelike characters. As i read more, i thirst for more. It jumped to be one of my favorites just with the quality of the writing. The story is at its nascent phase so I can't say much about that though.

I must say, I absolutely loved the way the author detailed the scenes and the world. It made it easy for me, as the reader, to picture what I was reading. You earn a 5-star review from me! Great work and all the best!

The writing is lovely. It's been a long time since I've seen writing of this quality on Webnovel. The novel itself is interesting and I have high hopes for it. As of now the novel is in its early stages so I can't give the most thorough review but this novel shows promise. Keep up the good work author!