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2022-06-16 04:38

love this book. I hope for many more updated from the author. I just started and caught up reading today so can't really speak on update stability. There is no grammar errors I seen so far and character design is all great. Don't see too many future setting novels with a alien mc. My only gripe with the story is that the mc is useless right now but this wouldn't be a weak to strong novel with out a weak mc starting out. Just hope this picks up within so many chapters or the story will fill too slow not saying you should rush either author. To a thousand chapters.

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Pasithea_Midnight
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Pasithea_Midnight
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Thank you for the review! I hope I continue to meet your expectations now and in the future, my update rate when I started was about one chapter a day, but when I started writing all my chapters were around 1.5k words now they are around 2.4k words, and due to the word count of each chapter I do about two and sometimes three a week. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and my characters, I, myself am not a fan of how weak my character is, but that is all in due time, I'd say the thing about her getting stronger being slow is due to her being young and also that I'm showing the world from several different character angles(excluding the Kritol) so different fronts of the world are shown. Don't worry though! It will pick up soon, this arc will be ending soon, and next, we will be visiting the Mirror! My story will certainly be more than a hundred chapters but I don't know about a thousand, only time can tell. Once again, I'm glad you are enjoying my story. Sharing your thoughts with me fills me with joy, sorry for the long reply.

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ZJAY_1
ZJAY_1Lv14

you gucci I wish I could write out my novel but I'm a lazy bum so I'm just writing for my fanfics

Pasithea_Midnight:Thank you for the review! I hope I continue to meet your expectations now and in the future, my update rate when I started was about one chapter a day, but when I started writing all my chapters were around 1.5k words now they are around 2.4k words, and due to the word count of each chapter I do about two and sometimes three a week. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and my characters, I, myself am not a fan of how weak my character is, but that is all in due time, I'd say the thing about her getting stronger being slow is due to her being young and also that I'm showing the world from several different character angles(excluding the Kritol) so different fronts of the world are shown. Don't worry though! It will pick up soon, this arc will be ending soon, and next, we will be visiting the Mirror! My story will certainly be more than a hundred chapters but I don't know about a thousand, only time can tell. Once again, I'm glad you are enjoying my story. Sharing your thoughts with me fills me with joy, sorry for the long reply.
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Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_MidnightAuthor

I actually read your Kaguya Fanfic and your Techno Organic novel and I really like them a lot, you're a good writer. I hope you find the energy or motivation to overcome your laziness and write more.

ZJAY_1:you gucci I wish I could write out my novel but I'm a lazy bum so I'm just writing for my fanfics
2yr
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ZJAY_1
ZJAY_1Lv14

my kaguya fanfic is my favorite to write since I treat it like a novel and its my first fanfic I ever wrote so I put a lot of thought into it. Techno organic went through a lot of story redesigns. Surprisingly my gun in a dungeon fanfic the story I put the least thought in is my most popular. Goes to show how easy it is to gain attention in the anime fanfic section if you come up with a original idea with a popular anime.

Pasithea_Midnight:I actually read your Kaguya Fanfic and your Techno Organic novel and I really like them a lot, you're a good writer. I hope you find the energy or motivation to overcome your laziness and write more.
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I don't know what to write, I just simply love the story. And I also like the color blue, makes it even better. And the MCs name is Lulu, the same name as one of my favorite champions from League of Legends. If I love the book so much, what else can I give but 5 stars? Probably biased, but I couldn't care less. Every time I see the "1 book updated." and a red mark on the book in my library, I get excited.

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