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Cewu
CewuLv142yrCewu

The novel is not that bad at face value. The writing is... ok... some grammar mistakes that I have noticed but it is not the end of the world. Mediocre for this website. The stability of updates is pretty good so far. Character design is meh... haven't seen much from it but so far it has been AU... that is the author makes this how he likes them. World background... it is a Naruto FF ... nothing new here. Story Development - There is fluff with Hinata and i was for that all the way... the author said harem... that is a big minus in my books considering he has the sweetheart that is Hinata. On the other hand... the MCs actions are dubious at best... and one thing he did I rly disliked. We might agree that Boruto is trash... but the action that the MC took on ch 7 was just peak bull-sheit. I would have continued to read if there was something like... absorb the power but leave the soul... but no... complete kill. Well in conclusion: The FF is mediocre... and thus it gets the score of 2.8. The MCs actions are horrible and that is why I dropped. Good Luck author with this novel!

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Imperador_do_Caos
Imperador_do_CaosLv1Imperador_do_Caos

2,8 no 0,1 yes what do you mean not so bad it sucks Are you commenting on this because there are worse things?

HumblePoet
HumblePoetLv3HumblePoet

Thanks for the review

Cewu
CewuLv14Cewu

well yes... there are novels and fan fictions much worse than this... and I'm trying to be objective... if I don't like the plot it doesn't mean that the book is not readable.

Imperador_do_Caos:2,8 no 0,1 yes what do you mean not so bad it sucks Are you commenting on this because there are worse things?