I just love this fic, for now it's one of the best dbz fanfics in this site, not too OP but building up, usually all the dbz fics have the mc be a saiyan, be as strong or almost as strong as beerus and learn all the techniques and abilities before Goku even starts his own journey, this mc has a more realistic (taking into account that this is dbz) raise to power, also, the mc is not an evil or a morally grey person, he is kind and helps people, which is refreshing with all the oportunistic and/or evil mc here, I just hope that this doesn't turn into a 'mc is far more powerful than anyone else so he has to fight everyone's battles for them' it would be interesting seeing the mc having a rivalry with goku and vegeta to see who's stronger, and be equally powerful, also this mc is pure human (with some majin cells which give him some of majin buu's abilities) , which is nice for me because I was a little sick of so many saiyans, I like them, but I like a little diversity more, and no harem which is 😩👌, the grammar seems fine to me, but english is not my native language, so I can't be of much help there, hope you don't abandone this fic, this has a lot of potential and you're doing great.
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It's really nice to see a review that's actually helpful, and not just a bunch of heart emojis. Thank you for the helpful review, since this helps me know that I will probably enjoy this story.
