I will be open it pretty good writing but the second I read that the main character has eaten the jacket fruit I lost all interest into it. The lame power with not many if any good applications. I'm not a fan of op character fic but on the other hand I'm not the biggest fan of the story like The Bite either. So the story just doesn't hit my personal taste. I read until chapter 8 but still cant find my self reading further. To all the people who enjoy this story have fun and the author continue writing it not a bad story just doesn't suit my taste.

the story is good I have a question first if he goes to marineford he will get white beards jacket? that's all I had to say never drop it

Really good and original. Lots of orignal content incorpersted very well into the one piece world. Its exciting that the author choose a weak DF instead of normal OP ones. worth teh rea

i did not get why mc want to help law getting the ope ope no mi??? the idiot lost a crew member for nothing >_> -----------------------------------------

It's good from the start, I really like story and the characters. But the author ruined it's story in the minion island arc. It's disappointing, he helped law to get ope2 fruit even he know it's so risky yet he didn't gain advantage or benefits only promises. Heck even law given asylum to marine and MC lost a crew member. Author portray the mc a smart guy and tactician but suddenly becomes dumb. If the author recruit law I will not dropped this ff, yet now I'm to cliche for the plot even though he awakened conquerors haki.

*chefs kiss* perfection, this is one of the best stories I have ever gotten to read writing quality- I am no expert there are little mistakes here and there but they don't affect the flow at all like words twice or something like that, 5 stars. stability of updates- the author keeps being consistent and sometimes publishes two chapters a day so 5 stars story development- one of the best aspects of this fanfic is its development and story progressing, not only nothing is forced but every little change to the world of one piece has ripples that come later, it gives the same feeling as reading one piece again where the world slowly builds around you. 5/5 sorry I can't give 10/5 character design- I'll tell the truth there aren't a lot of OC's if at all, but the characters stay true to what is shown in the anime. I would give 4/5 but this story deserves its 5 stars lol world background- well... its one piece

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Great novel, was put off due to him having the jacket fruit but, I’m happy I stuck with it. Definitely worth the read.

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