It s god but sadly I can't understand most of it like part where bro u 3 ,4,2 etc....... Hope you improve in future overall good new fresh idea for novel I like it I can't write more because I myself is bed writer worse than you're.
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LIKENoNameDeity:First review from Luminousone himself, your presence shall now be immortalized in my novel. This Old Ancestor here shall give you my blessings in the Dao of Writing and hope you get better on your path of the Dao