Review Detail of HANA_4345 in Trails of Genesis

So... I finished the first chapter of the revamped version. I don't know what made you revamp the story, but it's definitely not an easy job to re-edit an idea that you have already written so many chapters (I normally just edit some mistakes here and there because of my laziness). So, kudos to the author for taking such a big challenge and revamping the whole story. It's definitely enjoyable this revamped version, everything is so detailed that it's easy to imagine the scene that you are currently reading.